Comments on: “Stay, Illusion…” by Elena Jacob – Flash Fiction Ghost Story http://ravenhartpress.com/stay-illusion-flash-fiction-ghost-story/ An Unkindness of Writers Wed, 23 Mar 2016 21:19:00 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=3.8.41 By: Elena Jacob http://ravenhartpress.com/stay-illusion-flash-fiction-ghost-story/#comment-230 Fri, 04 Jan 2013 01:31:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=511#comment-230 :D :D :D Awesome! I’m very proud of that–I was hoping I could pull it off, but you never know until you put it out there!

Thanks for reading!! :)

]]> By: Elena Jacob http://ravenhartpress.com/stay-illusion-flash-fiction-ghost-story/#comment-229 Fri, 04 Jan 2013 01:30:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=511#comment-229 Thank you! I’m glad you liked it :D And LOL I loved writing that part, so I’m glad it was enjoyable for you, too!

]]> By: Chris Shawbell http://ravenhartpress.com/stay-illusion-flash-fiction-ghost-story/#comment-228 Thu, 03 Jan 2013 12:45:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=511#comment-228 You ninja’d me. I don’t get ninjitsu’d often at. At one point I was thinking, “She’s very casual about the ghosts frolicking about their place.” Really good set up. Even Danny going “through her” (he’s the ghost) isn’t a give away. Well done.

~Chris

]]> By: C L Raven http://ravenhartpress.com/stay-illusion-flash-fiction-ghost-story/#comment-225 Wed, 02 Jan 2013 11:29:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=511#comment-225 love it! That was a great story. We really liked the characters and their close friendship is obvious with the way they interact with each other. The part where Lynn & Danny freak each other out is funny. Good job!

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