Comments on: Sacrifice http://ravenhartpress.com/sacrifice/ An Unkindness of Writers Wed, 23 Mar 2016 21:19:00 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=3.8.41 By: Elena Jacob http://ravenhartpress.com/sacrifice/#comment-176 Thu, 18 Oct 2012 20:37:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=440#comment-176 Woo! No worries–I’m glad you got to do all that stuff, it was important! And good! I need the pressure! :D

]]> By: Mark Lidstone http://ravenhartpress.com/sacrifice/#comment-175 Thu, 18 Oct 2012 04:13:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=440#comment-175 It pains me to have not helped. This weekend I finish moving. That means the Boston project is done and my move is done so I’ll be back to writing/editing/critiquing. This means I will be harassing you for Ever chapters. I will MAKE you write it!

]]> By: Elena Jacob http://ravenhartpress.com/sacrifice/#comment-173 Wed, 17 Oct 2012 23:16:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=440#comment-173 Thanks! :D Gut-twisting is the goal! This was a rush-job but I’m still pretty happy with how it came out (though it would be better if I’d had my proof-reader available…*cough*) ;)

]]> By: Mark Lidstone http://ravenhartpress.com/sacrifice/#comment-172 Tue, 16 Oct 2012 20:12:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=440#comment-172 Fantastic, Elena. Another story that makes my gut twist. I stopped breathing when I baby began to cry and didn’t start again until it was over.

]]> By: Elena Jacob http://ravenhartpress.com/sacrifice/#comment-167 Fri, 12 Oct 2012 03:00:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=440#comment-167 Thank you! The scene has been sitting around my brain for quite some time…and yes, it really does make you grateful for the peace we enjoy, compared to the terror some people have to live in…

If you enjoyed this, you’d LOVE the stories A Garden of Graves (http://ravenhartpress.com/2012/06/21/a-garden-of-graves/) and Forget-me-not (http://ravenhartpress.com/2012/05/17/forget-me-not/)

Thanks for reading! :D

]]> By: Michael K. Eidson http://ravenhartpress.com/sacrifice/#comment-166 Fri, 12 Oct 2012 01:46:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=440#comment-166 This story is told so vividly and with such emotion, tension, and feeling of loss. It makes me glad I live where I do.

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