Comments on: “Memento Mori” by C.L. Raven – Flash Fiction Ghost Story

By: Rebecca Fisk

Rebecca Fisk — Wed, 02 Jan 2013 17:59:00 +0000

This was great!! And the addition of “that’s what she said” was simply….perfection

By: Elena Jacob

Elena Jacob — Thu, 27 Dec 2012 16:17:00 +0000

indeed! Thank you for commenting!

By: Larry Kollar

Larry Kollar — Thu, 27 Dec 2012 15:00:00 +0000

This packed a great wallop, even if I saw the punch coming!

By: Elena Jacob

Elena Jacob — Thu, 27 Dec 2012 14:51:00 +0000

I’m glad I did! I knew you ladies wouldn’t disappoint ;D And thank YOU for writing such an awesome story! I’m proud to host it on my blog

By: Elena Jacob

Elena Jacob — Thu, 27 Dec 2012 14:50:00 +0000

I also love the characters–it’s always fun when you can glimpse their personality, even if it’s for such a short piece

By: C L Raven

C L Raven — Thu, 27 Dec 2012 13:31:00 +0000

thanks Elena for telling us about this. We loved the challenge. The Dark Opera – thank you! The story’s actually based on a Welsh ghost story, but we changed the name.

By: The Dark Opera

The Dark Opera — Thu, 27 Dec 2012 02:21:00 +0000

Enjoyed it. I liked that the characters were quirky. Also, I loved being left with the image of a tormented village below the water. Too, “The pew at the back creaked like a gallows bearing the weight of a hanging man” was great. Good show.