Comments on: “Crying” by Jason Cantrell – Flash Fiction Ghost Story http://ravenhartpress.com/crying-flash-fiction-ghost-story/ An Unkindness of Writers Wed, 23 Mar 2016 21:19:00 +0000 hourly 1 https://wordpress.org/?v=3.8.41 By: Kickstarter Project for the Short Story “Radiance” | Writing Possibilities http://ravenhartpress.com/crying-flash-fiction-ghost-story/#comment-326 Mon, 19 Aug 2013 17:11:27 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=464#comment-326 [...] of Faith, Soldier of Light, and a few others, possibly including revised and expanded versions of Crying and Maternal Instincts, the flash fiction stories I posted online). The first ebook I’m [...]

]]> By: Elena Jacob http://ravenhartpress.com/crying-flash-fiction-ghost-story/#comment-222 Sun, 30 Dec 2012 19:01:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=464#comment-222 It was very chilling! Thanks for reading! :D

]]> By: Chris Shawbell http://ravenhartpress.com/crying-flash-fiction-ghost-story/#comment-219 Sun, 30 Dec 2012 06:59:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=464#comment-219 I enjoyed the read, Jason. The suspense of the crying babe and approaching the nursery was great.

~CLS~

]]> By: Elena Jacob http://ravenhartpress.com/crying-flash-fiction-ghost-story/#comment-204 Mon, 24 Dec 2012 02:58:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=464#comment-204 I agree–that closing line really ties the whole thing together in a very sad way. Very powerful!

]]> By: The Dark Opera http://ravenhartpress.com/crying-flash-fiction-ghost-story/#comment-203 Sun, 23 Dec 2012 17:28:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=464#comment-203 I like it! That ending, “Taunted by the silence she’d wished for.” certainly adds quite a bit of depth. It was very well put.

]]> By: Elena Jacob http://ravenhartpress.com/crying-flash-fiction-ghost-story/#comment-202 Sun, 23 Dec 2012 04:11:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=464#comment-202 It came out great! I love seeing people move outside their comfort zone in writing–the results can be fascinating :D

]]> By: Jason Cantrell http://ravenhartpress.com/crying-flash-fiction-ghost-story/#comment-200 Sun, 23 Dec 2012 03:20:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=464#comment-200 I’m glad to see so many people are enjoying the story!

It’s well outside my normal range. It’s always a risk to delve into a writing style that isn’t your norm. I’m glad the response is proving a success.

]]> By: Elena Jacob http://ravenhartpress.com/crying-flash-fiction-ghost-story/#comment-199 Sun, 23 Dec 2012 00:50:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=464#comment-199 He did a fantastic job of painting the picture of what happened and what she is going through in such a short time. Very chilling, very sad…

]]> By: Chere http://ravenhartpress.com/crying-flash-fiction-ghost-story/#comment-198 Sat, 22 Dec 2012 22:56:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=464#comment-198 I absolutely loved it. The way you wove in the backstory of what happened to the baby. And why she heard his cries was amazing.

]]> By: Elena Jacob http://ravenhartpress.com/crying-flash-fiction-ghost-story/#comment-197 Sat, 22 Dec 2012 21:08:00 +0000 http://ravenhartpress.com/?p=464#comment-197 Absolutely! The tone of this one is so…eerie! He did a great job with creating a creepy atmosphere and making the reader unsettled :D

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